Yeah, I liked this one too, I think I have a thing for lovey dovey poems...

5 of 5

wow... this is really good. Normally I'm not a big poetry fan but I read it anyway and I was pretty amazed. This is awesome ^_^

Woah, I really like this. Near the end it was especially good. The simile of blankets being like icy fingers was really nice. Awesome job with that. I also like the simplicity of your short lines. Great job, I really like it.

Keep writing

~Rhia

wow. this was really, really good. by the end, it's kind of got that whole bittersweet feeling, and it's easily relatable. excellent job with descriptions. really, it was amazing. great job.