Wow! awesome chapter! well worth the long wait.

You Are forgiven...just hurry up and continue this is F-ING HILARIOUS! Love ya!

hey, this is a good story but will it be any longer if not a sequel? *smiles nervously* i like the idea and actually i have a few like these myself. what other stories do you have?

LOVE IT KEEP IT UP!

You know, there may be a flaw to the whole never getting boring thing. See, with stories that can get boring, we eagerly await the next installment, because we kid ourselves that it could get interesting in the next part. With this story, one already knows that the story will never get boring, so there isn't really much to look forward to. Wait, scratch that, it's not really what I meant to say. Anyway, maybe you should re-name the story something like, "The Story That Never Gets Boring- NOT!" and then ever couple of chapters, you should make the ending really boring, so that people will really look forward to the next chapter, out of desperation.

Okay. Now, let's pretend that I didn't say any of that, because I just had to write it because it made no sense, but was amusing to write. Now we really are pretending that I didn't write anything before the start of this sentence.

You know, I never considered the possibility that Liz could have friends. It just seems so un-like her.

I love the speak vs. talk part, because it is awesome. And it reminds me of the conversations in my head sometimes. I also love the fact that Carlotta emphasizes, though she could emphasize a lot more. A LOT more. I really like the substitute teacher. And I want to know more about the counsellor, like what the dear darling girl will blackmail her with.

Well, I'm fervently awaiting the next segment. Keep on writing!

-Wily Wind

After reading the summary I was thinking it was some Inuyasha inspired story, which I am not a big fan of, but it was nothing like it. Most stories I've seen like it just rip the show off. This story completely changed my views.

Other than that, I await the action.

Hey,

Just asking,

Since you do like action from what i can see, I was thinking you might like my story "The Drifter." I just posted it, but the first chapter is seven pages of pure action I was hoping people would enjoy. If you could, readt it and tell me what you think?

It was just a small favor, you don't have to, but that's cool. I understand.

Great story though

ohh... gettin interesting. I somehow doubt Liz brought the knives to school just so she could she her friends, so why did she bring them? hurry up and write so I can find out!

Oh, and I hope that you can somehow recover Monster Hunt. its sad that such an awesome story could juts be destroyed like that.

Can't wait! Very inpatient! Post it sometime! Check out and review my stories when you get the chance! later!

Remind me to not go to shchool with her... or any person/being who just happens to have two very sharp stilettos in their bag. Well, anyway, this is a pretty awesome beginning, with the whole Egypt-god myth stuff (I'm kind of assuming that there's going to be some stuff like that).

Did I mention that I am drooling over her pretty weapons? The bow sounds really nice- I want it.

Keep on writing! I promise to be impatient then when you update I'll read it ravenously.

-Wily Wind

Wow, creepy. Just my kind of story. I cant wait to see how this will play out.