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Reviews For: Comfortable Silence

cornered.sensations
2006-11-21
ch 1,
abuseI like this, your descriptions and register are perfect for the story. Also, i love the french, the characters, how you describe the birds - it's such a new inventive perspective, many would have done the opposite. You seem to write quite well indeed, please continue as i would love to know what would happen.
Lady Patience
2006-04-01
ch 1,
abuseYou just knew I'd pester you forever if you didn't do it.

That was perfect, my love.
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