ello. well, this is an awesome poem. i kinda feel like that too, still frozen, not wanting spring.you did a great job with the emotions. and it all went together really good. great last paragraph.~later yet

I’m going through and reviewing some of the work of the people who have listed me as a favorite author, as a small way of saying thank you. So here’s your thank-you review!

This is nicely written. You did a very good job of expressing yourself in this poem. The message is straightforward and elegantly told. It’s easy to follow and interesting, too. I like the comparison of stages of a person’s life to seasons of the year. It’s not an original concept, but you put your own unique spin on it. Keep up the good work!