WOW...OMG...this is so powerful and just amazing. The thoughts running through this are so deep and just so sad. I really love it and this is one of my favourite pieces ever, well done, this is phenomenal! Great Job!

Love You xx

intersting.. not your best, but still good.. I like the short lines a lot

i really like this, "...underneath the clothes she wears. No one knows what she just did..." That was my favorite part. I think it just ties the whole poem together! great job!

this was superbly written.

Wow this is amazing! It's so powerful and beautfifully written. Great work! V x

Amazing. I love the mystery.

Hmm... fits very nicely, no work needed. It should be published just the way it is.

Wow! Excellent work! Keep writing! *applaudes*!

Anna _