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| Mia Nicole 2008-02-20 ch 1,  | abuseHaha. I seriously really like this. I love the beginning of the poem. My only real suggestion is to change the 'coz' in the 10th line to cause, because it's kind of internetty and stuff. But great poem. :D |
| Plinky 2006-04-02 ch 1, | abuseCute. I can relate to that, I reckon most people probably can. Keep writing! |
| Rhianika 2006-04-01 ch 1, | abuseAw I like it. I remember feeling like that about some guys. Really nice poem, you expressed the feeling well. Good job. Keep writing ~Rhia |