 Moondog Dozier 2006-04-12 . chapter 1Interestingly honest or deceptive. You've developed this well. Like a timeline of maturity. Well crafted around the theme. Good work. |
 Morcirith 2006-04-03 . chapter 1very cold and humorous at the same time...i can picture your expression |
 Elizabeth Bilberry 2006-04-02 . chapter 1This poem was simple in a way but I could feel the emotions in it still. Keep writing.
EB |
 Princess-anna57 2006-04-01 . chapter 1Great work, excellent. Write on!
~Anna~ |