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| Amanda 2006-08-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh my gosh! That was so good! The plot heavy plot mixed in with the humor was great! I'm very implressed. There is only one little thing that I saw that was not so good. The spelling. There were quite a few spelling errors, which is understandable. I just think that it could be better if you corrected the spelling and grammar. But other than that, boy, that was GREAT! :) You'd better finish it soon. I want to read the rest! |
| commasplicemurderer 2006-08-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseI would strongly suggest reading your work out loud, word by word, for several reasons. One, it helps reduce typos. Two, it helps with phrasing. Third, it helps with knowing when things are good and when they're just plain dumb. Also, we have this wonderful thing in the English language called a pronoun. Use it. Please. You do have potential, but your work is very raw. Getting a writing instructor would be greatly beneficial, trust me. Keep writing, and you'll improve. And don't cut yourself. It's bad for your epidermis. :) |
| froggielover 2006-08-15 ch 1, anon. | abusethis is a good story... i am looking forward to the update if there is one |
| Alena D'Etoiles 2006-08-14 ch 1,  | abuseYet again, very nice. Loved it. Definatly going on favs. You need to finish it now. Or else...o_O |
| Black and White Dreams 2006-06-20 ch 1, | abuseGoing on my favorite stories list! =) This was really interesting! I liked it a lot! There are a few typos but other than that, it was perfect! |
| NowNameless 2006-04-02 ch 1, | abuseThis is the best story I have ever read!... I wish I was as good as you! |