Not bad at all. However, don't force rhymes; it takes away from the feeling and makes it technical.

two typos I believe: 1) "I fall in love && I fall out"

and 2) "To loves gravity" (To lose gravity?)

Decent piece otherwise. :)

It's like WHOAH- that's me!...in a way. The middle part mostly. I love it! Awesome.

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