I really enjoy this story. Keep it up. :)

I'm reviewing, I'm reviewing. Praises be to me.

Lots of stuff going on already... oh my indeed. Her "dream" was very disturbing. Blasted traitor. I didn't think his death was nearly gruesome enough.

Your writing seems... I dunno, more eloquent in this story. Do you do that intentionally? I think it works nicely with your plotline, or at least what I've read of it.

Hades is great fun. More of him!

very nice, I can't wait for what happens next. ^^

~Waterhealer