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| LeChem 2007-08-20 ch 1,  | abuseWow I never knew an eight-year-old could write something like that! Pass on my praises! |
| Kaye90 2006-06-06 ch 1, | abusedamn. who are your parents? b/c your talent must be genetic.i know "...my town, my world, my universe, Where I, Only I rule" all too well!and, of course, that last line makes the entire poem, as last lines often do.give my kudos to your little brother! |
| who-im-bleeding-for 2006-06-03 ch 1, | abuseholy freak, he's only 8?! that's awesome. |
| Zane Richardson Waya Wolf 2006-04-15 ch 1, | abuse(bows) good work m'lord, powerfully stated heh heh. ^_^ |
| Sugar-Craze 2006-04-12 ch 1, | abuseAh! Love the imagination in this poem! The flow of the words is nice and smooth! Very good! |
| Femme de Dieu 2006-04-11 ch 1, | abuseLittle brother ROX! I love the last line...it wrapped the entire poem up in a wonderful package of childhood fantasy. And yet... We adults oftentimes do the same thing... Wonderful potential...keep writing! A poet in the making, a beautiful thing! |
| Smoky Bear 2006-04-02 ch 1, | abusethat's very sweet! |