Amazing, I read it over three times. The rhyming is really good and the whole thing is very well written. This touched me somehow and I like stuff that does that. I love this piece, well done.

This poem is really beautiful. The rhyme works- it isn't awkward or contrived, and that's hard to do. Good job!

I admire what this poem expresses though I've seen your other stuff and the mode could've been a bit more complex--but maybe that was part of your strategy

but wow I nearly choked on that last line

a nice piece

"One Sunday with the choir singing,/I chanced a glance at the ceiling./There hung the angel, dead and swinging."

A beautifully written, very sad poem. This is unlike anything I've read.

Wow. I've never seen anything like this, but its reall good. Again, wow.