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| Leeona Trance 2006-11-14 ch 1,  | abuseA very sad image. The last two lines sound bitter. It flows well, and the second to last line stands out, not just because it was bolded. I like it. ~LT |
| Lovetress 2006-04-10 ch 1, | abuseI can relate so well. Friendships suck, dont they? |