Wonderful poem, although I think you and I have different ideas about "short," lol. Very visual, and definatly true! Keep on writing!

a very accurate description of teenagers. again amazing imagry, it captures the attention. you have real talent

woah. z, ur good. that is totally my life. woah. oh and woof. hehe :)

That shows it prefectly! Not sure if you kmow who you are... being lost... great!

This was excellent!

Like it a lot! Write on!