Wow, this is a really fantastic poem! It flows so well and gets your story across without pushing anything to its limit, nor holding back from the meaning. I very much enjoyed how the hope and remorse weaved themselves together to create a perfect imitation of life. I particularly loved the imagery around the clouds, stars, headlights, and streetlamps.
Great poem!

The rhyme scheme is a little continues for my style, but I really like it. You can feel the warmth of the poem.

I really like this poem. I love rhyming couplets. That is how I started writing. I was trying to find a line that I liked more than the rest but I can't. Your poem flows together very well and expresses your ideas easily. The ending is great. Thank you.

Lizzie I love you! (by the way, this is Katie) The poem was amazing. You and Margaret are both fantastic writers. I can't wait to read more from you. It was realy sad though. Talk to you later...hee hee

I like this piece very much. The voice is stong and the emotion clear.Very well done.

I really like the words of the poem but the rhythm is a little rough for poetry. It has taken you forever to post anything ya know...and it wasn't even a chapter of path!

I was just thinking about you the other day and wondering if you were still writing though it's been awhile since we've both submitted anything new. I was really excited to get an author alert and came here straight away.Wow! I usually won't reveiw poems, but this one touched me. Anyway do the world a favor and keep writing!