cool dude. I'm glad you made it so bad ass!

Good job here i cant wait for the drifter vs drifter right.

I say.. this chapter feels as if it's the end of the story, but it ain't one. :P Nice battle scenes as well. It has that feeling that was overwhelming when Pitt had cornered Leon. Nice! Anyway... about the review in Bloodshed... erm.. I don't get it. o.O;

Wonderful! I

Looking forward to the next chapter, the fight between Leon and Tammie is sure to be great! Great chapter! Also, thanks for always reviewing my stories.

verey nice. u introed the enemies really well adn also geared up for a duel b/w tammie adn leon, lookin forward for the next chapter

YAY you updated! I kept checking back everyday - Great chapter! I can't wait for the next one. Update as soon as you can! :huggles:

Gerry

You weren't kidding when you said this story had action! It's full of great scenes designed to get the male testosterone pumping! I have to admit, these are some of the best actions scenes that I have read in a long time. You have some real talent in describing them in a nice amount of detail. And man, this is only the prologue! The plot definitely pulled me in and when I can get some more time on my hands, I will definitely review the rest! So until then, keep on writing!

See you next review!

Terryll Preston, still2twisted of Fictionpress fame...

Lol, it's 10:04 here, darn it. Ah well,I don't celebrate 4:20, but that's okay. You must be estatic now though, you're about to have almost 60 reviews! You may need to throw another party _

Ah, interesting chapter. I can't get enough of this wonderful story _

You're right, I definiately like where it went. Very interesting indeed. *sighs* I should work on Into the Void for this week, I think I'll get to it after I read the rest of this and another reviewer's story that they had asked for me to review.

Hm...See Sasuke's touch to the story eh? This could be interesting.

Beautifully done on this chapter as well. Sorry I didn't get done with all these in one sitting like I promised. But I did come back for more. I'm addicted to this story, it's like crack, only there are no bad side effects.

Well, I must read on _ Thank you for all of your kind reviews _

Wow, awesome story, this'll help me describe action better, thank you!

hehehe a gay gypsy -

Aw don't cry :huggles: your story is really good, you deserve many reviews. - Update as soon as you can please. -

Gerry