Cool, I like it. It's different from what I usually read.

Wow great detail! The fight scenes are amazing and I cant wait to see the next chapters gunfight. This is definately a well written piece of work! I am looking foward to more-i put ya on my alert list so I know when you post a new chapter! So until then.. Great work!

Tara

oh btw thanks for the review I'm glad you liked my story

Not quite your best work, yet still pretty good! Something else that is funny, the story is called the Drifter, and it drifts from writer to writer. I just thought that was funny.