This story is amazing. The characters are great and the story is just like a manga. I've been on this site for a while and this is still my only favorite story, so that should tell you how good it is.

Again, really great story!

Very interesting story, although there were a lot of spelling mistakes (Which I'd be happy to help you with)

Something it just jumps out at me and says "Western scene"; I think it was the scene at the bar. I'll let you know what I think of the other chapters

Yay, Deedlith finally fought and her battle was awesome! Don't know why you were worried. Too bad she didn't exactly overwhelm her opponent, but then I understand she's not a warrior type... at least not yet. And that ending with Ajoz... gulp... you're not gonna kill him off, are you?
Update ASAP, coz I need to know what happens next!

Ajoz won rather easily, but things get though from now on... and what's more, it seems all Fangrin's goons can transform into different animals... this certainly should prove interesting. Can't wait to find out what the others will have to go through!

Well, this chapter was still pretty mysterious... I wonder what'll happen now, especially since the bad guys seem to have the upper-hand. Can't wait for Jazon's fight, coz his abilities are cool and Deedlith, since we didn't really got to see her battle on her own.
Off to read more!

The hunt was okay, but what really blew my mind was the outcome: Haft a werewolf! That I did not saw coming! Great twist. And what will Kara do now? Can't wait to find out!

What the...? Don't kill Ajoz, dammit! How cruel can you get with such a cllify! Damn you! But Deedlith's fight was just out of this word! I loved the way you portraited her determination! It really helped her grow from what she was the first time we got to meet her. Awesome job on that.
Some of the upcoming fights will certainly be entertaining, but I couldn't help noticing Jazon wasn't shown in this chappie. Why?
Also: the omake is a nice touch.
Overall a great job and hope you'll be updating soon!

Well, Ajoz defeated his opponent kinda easy, but I really like he way he matured in that fight, so no biggie. And now he has quite a problem.
Seems that we'll be seeing were-creatures in this arc. Cool, I have high hopes for some kick-** battles and I'm sure you're not gonna disappoint me.
Keep up the great work!

So Fangrin is a werewolf too... hmm, sorta suspicious... and what exactly is he after? Still mysteries remain, I see... and what was that begining of the chapter? There's much more to this arc then you've already shown us, isn't there?
Awesome job!

Haft? Well, certainly an interesting twist. I would expect Fangrin, Mirka, heck, even that bartender, but not a dwarf! Certainly something you do not see in many, fantasy novels! Smeone other then human being a were-creature! Awesome!
Now I wonder how's Kara gonna get out of this...

I like how you make the plot evolves, this one seems to be the most complex of all the arcs in this tale up til now. I still can't stop wondering who that werewolf is, granted I have my idea.
And that finisher... was it the same man as from Ren's flashback? Is he coming back?
ARGH, I need to know!

New arc and this time it's a werewolf hunt, eh? Quite an interesting idea, although not a new one ;) And another dragonchild, yay! I must admit Jazon seems like a cool character and a nice addittion to Ren's party. I wonder who the likanotrop is... off to read more!

Awesome chapter! I hope Ajoz is going to be ok and finds away out of that situation.

Deedlith's battle was awesome! I loved it and sure hope there's gonna be more mage-duels in teh future (no offense to Kara, but she doesn't really fight with her magic). I really liked how you portraited her determination.
On another note: NO! Don't tell me Ajoz is actually gonna die! You can't kill him off! Let him live, dammit! And update soon, so that I see him live!
Btw, the omake was a nice touch.
Good job.

Well, the first fight was original (a were-mole XD), though didn't seem all that challenging for Ajoz... but certainly Turterico's betrayal I did not see coming. And Sadun's gonna fight Link in the end... good, hope he kicks his butt.
I also hope Deedlith's gonna be okay.
Off to read the next!