This was great! I was cracking up. I've been in John's place before. The ending was perfect. Good job.

oh wow! This was hilarious! I did not see the ending coming at all. Great job on this!

I think my favorite part was the fact that you made him red-green colorblind and so he picked up the wrong box of pads. XD!

Thanks for pointing me to your original stuff. It's very well written and highly entertaining.

oh wow! This was hilarious! I did not see the ending coming at all. Great job on this!

I think my favorite part was the fact that you made him red-green colorblind and so he picked up the wrong box of pads. XD!

Thanks for pointing me to your original stuff. It's very well written and highly entertaining.

Oh God... I was -really- not liking her.

She better make it up to him, you hear. XD

(waves 'Go Jennifer' flag)

You rock at both details and dialogue. I envy you.

This is a really great story, and the details are extremely well done. Where do you get random facts like that anyways? Actually, I think the ending isn't abrupt at all.

Heheh. Oh my cow. Now that was funny. I loved it. And the ending was really nice. Kudos. I'm going to read A Million Little Pieces, but I was halfway through this one when I saw your post. I'll get it read...maybe not tonight. But I will, promise.

Oh God, that is brilliant! I love the play on words that you had, and also John's exasperation. Cecilia's character is brilliant too. I love the 'children' reference that Cecilia keeps bringing up. It's very motherly. Wonderful work. ;D

Nicely done. I really liked the Mal-Wart idea. The Harry Potter joke is a little over done, but who cares? X) It does sort of end suddenly like you said, but it doesn't seem to take away at all; adding more might over do it. I don't know. Either way, 'tis good. =D