So detailed and poetic.

Beautiful! Good job!

Very good word choice here, Dragonslayer. Well done.

Peace, Daze

*blushes*it's beautiful. there's a really strong voice there. a lovely rhyme, which is kinda unexpected in the tanka form. and the meaning...*blushes*i didn't even realize... didn't even think of that...*blushes**hugs*love,sirius:)

I like it. It's simple, direct, and beautiful. Well done.