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Reviews For: Tears
Stephanie Passalacqua 2006-04-07 . chapter 1
I liked all the questions. I have asked plenty in my life time. Great poem. Keep writing. I really enjoyed reading this.
Deathbeforemyeyes 2006-04-04 . chapter 1
Aww i really like this one. I know the exact feeling, i know the pain.& you have a way with words yourself:]good job

->BErr*
Clearly Pixelated 2006-04-03 . chapter 1
You're right no one should feel like that! Why should you be any different? This might be the optimist in me speaking again. I think you need to find that light like in your "Smiling" poem. She seems to be the one thing that's breaking through all of this dreary-ness.

I did like this as with all of your poems, very emotional and moving. You have a way of expressing exactly what you mean.
shynesss 2006-04-02 . chapter 1
2 thumbs up...loved it. It's how I feel sometimes.
Scnd 2006-04-02 . chapter 1
Its amazing how much you can say without saying anything at all. A great author once told me a writer can fit any amount of content into any amount of space. I didn't really understand that untill I read this through a few times. You show so much emotion but you dont bind it to anything. Your words are as desolate and isolated as you feel. Stop being selfish with content. You already know the story, now tell it to us. Beautiful ammount of emotion, but like a shooting star it burnt up in the atmosphere and shed a little tear for the world to grit its teath and bear.
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