Another great poem. Weather your poems rhyme or not, what you want to get out, you do. Its is amazing how you do it.

Beautiful! Love the emotion in it!GoddessMizu

Nice flowing of thoughts, but I'm with the other reviewer, the rhyming does seem a little forced. Still good though, nothing extreeme. lol. ttyl

It's nice. But your rhyming seems to contrivived. Perhaps if you worked a bit more on your meter so that it flows better.