 Larurel 2006-04-04 . chapter 1 I liked it doesn't relate to me that much but i still liked it |
 Angel 2006-04-04 . chapter 1 I liked the poem, it was very heart-felt. |
 LeoOsaka 2006-04-03 . chapter 1You like to do repetitive type things don't you X3! Well it certainly works for you! I think you should try doing double alternates in a four line paragraph, I'd kinda like to see you write something like that! |
 without the sun im silent 2006-04-02 . chapter 1i love this poem, because as we speak at this very moment i can relate to this poem, every line in it relates to me on a personal level.I tip my hat to you...bravissima.keep writing |