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| Dreams in D minor 2008-01-24 ch 1,  | abusei loves it! such a sad thing to read really... but its really nice... oh i'm note confused! I wish i could show this to my friedns but i think they would just say.. okay... and leave.. haha... sorry about the randmness i'll get better at reviewing... i'm new... |
| Bleeding Regret 2006-09-04 ch 1, | abuseno. not confused at all. im picturing it and it looks beautiful. |
| The Fourth Fate 2006-06-08 ch 1, | abuseAww. I love the imagery and metaphors and everything. It's really sad. It feels familiar, I don't know why... Like I've felt that way before but I don't remember when. I really like this. I can't explain why though. It's left me kind of speechless... Very powerful. I love the part about imperfect tears. The sumamry is what really got me. |
| diffident 2006-06-08 ch 1, | abuse**? I never reviewed this? *slaps wrist* Bad shelby! I'm surprised I never reviewed it because I know I've read this before and this is abso**inglutely amazingx214739873bazilion. Honestly. Reminds me a great deal of the secret recording at the end of Disgustipated on Tool's Undertow, but I denno if you've heard that. Did I burn that CD for ye? It's similar in the way you wrote it but the context is way different and this is plain orgasmic. For some reason I just got an image of an anime-ized you holding bunches of uncooked linguini shaking them like maracas saying "Pasta, pasta! Nodles!" over and over. yeah... i love you! marie |
| Atelophobia 2006-05-19 ch 1, | abuseThis is creepy & curious. -is kind of freaked out. |
| poetic abortion 2006-04-06 ch 1, | abuselovely. ~* Noelle |
| The Melissa Occult 2006-04-05 ch 1, | abusethis creeped the ** hell out of me... sorry for the profanity but... eh... what do I say? I can't. this is something I think about and not say. It's a secret I'll keep... (just because no one else will know...) it makes me want to die inside... I want to be alone... right now... S. |
| Aquafied 2006-04-02 ch 1, | abuseits cruel cold and curious and leaves me wondering wonder. wonder. |
| Selvo 2006-04-02 ch 1, | abuseI am pretty sure i understood it. It is about a girl who is unsure about if the love between herself and her partner is true love or ust another hoax? Please get back to me on this... But the way i saw it; it |