Hehe I found ya. Had no idea you were on fictionpress. Now for the review, I liked the poem, a very nice setting Ajay I liked how you changed the language. That was a nice effect. Well done Ajay

hey!quite a cool poem, i'm not really into poetry, but i liked the mood you captured in your poetry!i'm from bangalore... you haven't written anything else? Keep writing, I want to read !

your format is astounding. it's different, and the content is so mystic and unusual, which is a good thing. good work.

-trinity

Love the mids stopping all the way through, love the language change... love the format in general.

Great job! The different languages really made it original and better.

LOVED the change of language! Even though i did not know the languages my mind could tell what was written in a way. If that makes sense. I must give it an A+