i said to a novelist that i've met that i wanted to create stories with strong images and he said that i should be a painter but sadly, i don't know how to paint... this drabble of yours only shows that writers do not need to paint with brushes but instead, they can use an ordinary black or blue pen and words to paint an image for the readers... you have done just that... great job! looking forward to read more of your drabbles... ^_^

You are both artist and writer. XD

Just have to comment that I many times had SP episodes wherein I imagined just utter nothingness. Scared the * out of me.

Lovely. ^^

Very nice =)

Beautiful sounding and full of description. It leaves you wondering what you're actually talking about, but if that was the point you definitely achieved it. Mysterious and lots of room for expansion if desired. ^-^

Very elegant, a little plotless for a stunning "drabble" but definitely worth a read. Nice work.

I'll review Chapters 1 & 2 together since they're so short. :)

Cosmic: I love it, the imagery is gorgeous. I don't really think I have any constructive criticism behind it besides the fact that it makes me curious about who/what she is. It's heavily reminiscient of images of the Weaving Maiden, however. [I hope you know who I'm referring to. >_

very pretty. It kind of reminds me of a creation story..dunno..just strikes me as that. The words flow pretty well. A little out there, but I still can enjoy the way you used words. Keep it up.

wow..sounds beautiful. You did an awesome job describing it.

weird but nice. i like it