I loved this poem. The shortness of it was brilliant, and the poem itself is bittersweet. Each line is like an etch mark through my heart, but in a good way. lol

Chilling. Beautiful. Nicely done!

i can feel that there is something really really important you want to say, but you seem to say everything but it at the same time. great wording though, with good thought process. lovely.

Lovely flow.

I like the title..favorite line has to be: A salty pearl of sadness,

pretty...I liked it. Keep it up!

hmm well so far the title seems to be ok as far as that goes, but the poem is very good.. Keep it Up!