that is good, i love it! It makes me think so hard! you are a good writer! keep at it!

I thought your story was excellent but it sounds more like a poem than a fiction. Keep up the good work and please R&R my new story "Fau Lings Battle" it's new on the website.

very odd. interesting. Where in the world did you get the idea?

congrats on your win.

weelilwolf

oh wow! ** Loud Applause ** **Standing ovation** If those people wont give it to the person, I WILL! **burts into pices**

VERRRRRRRYYYYYYY FUNNY!

That would be weird. How can you be so...good...? Original and very very well written.

It's really nice. Fits the subject perfectly. lol. Anyway, I really liked it.

-I- remember this one... *claps* Sta-chan LIKES!

O.O! Wwwooooooooooooooooooooow! This was great, xoe!

That is such a weird thought! It reminds me of the feeling I had the first time I watched the Matrix... totally blown out of my mind!

*nods* Mesa read this on the bus! and i like it! Very good, xoe! :) I like the shattering ending, its SOOO neato! :)