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Spector'sGirl
2006-04-10
ch 1,
abusegreat imagery - my favorite is definitly "fumbling Argentine tango"
in theory
2006-04-03
ch 1,
abuse"excuse me, your pants are vibrating..."Classic line! Haha very amusing in a sick, deep way. I got a little lost in this if I'm honest, but I enjoyed the journey.
Winter Reflections
2006-04-03
ch 1,
abusethis is so different. i really, really like it! keep writing!

Monkey
Plinky
2006-04-03
ch 1,
abuseReally love this. Again, I'm not really sure what it is about it that I like.

Your style is great.

"because after all I’ve still got my legs on a wet Sunday afternoon" Love that line.

"as my hair slips out of that pony tail my sparkling sequin hemline lifts off the floor floats at my ankles." Lovely stanza. Perfect detail.

Really nice poem. Again - you have a way of capturing a scene or an idea and make it poetry (I know that sounds strange but its true.)

Keep writing!
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