Your words paint such lively images . . . mystifying. I had to read it over again to fully comprehend the metaphor.

**Astarte

So hauntingly beautiful. I really love you description.

not 5-7-5! finally! :D and what a pretty poem it was, lol. again... thats all i got to describe it.

keep on writing Wintertigress-::-

So much movement and mystery. Well done.

Sweet, I love it when you can take care of a line in one word! lol, you are good at this haiku stuff! lol, I like.

Wow, amazing combination of different things into images, you truly are talented.

Wow! This is beautiful! From all of the poems you have posted I get the idea that you really love to write. I think that you are a great writer, so best of luck to you!

XoXo

wow..I don't really know what to make of this, but its mystery is very good. Nice work!