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| Durandel 2006-05-05 ch 1, | abuseYo, good stuff |
| Pink Sparrow 2006-04-28 ch 1, | abuseWow... just wow.. so powerful. The rhyming made the whole thing just... so intense, I don't know. I can't describe the emotions that this poem brings me. Its so sad... I like the different sides and everything is beautiful. I think maybe the start bit could have been more poetic maybe, it was more like a story at the start. But it was still wonderful. Nice work! |