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Reviews For: Two sides of a suicidal case

Durandel
2006-05-05
ch 1,
abuseYo, good stuff
Pink Sparrow
2006-04-28
ch 1,
abuseWow... just wow.. so powerful. The rhyming made the whole thing just... so intense, I don't know. I can't describe the emotions that this poem brings me. Its so sad... I like the different sides and everything is beautiful. I think maybe the start bit could have been more poetic maybe, it was more like a story at the start. But it was still wonderful. Nice work!
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