Nice stories! You were one of the authors that Michael Panush and Javeharron reccommended. I enjoy reading your stories!

Just finished reading this all in one go - oh God, my poor, aching eyes - and I have to say that I am honestly blown away. Killer story, dude. Just absolutely killer. I'm currently moving on to 'Robert The Devil' and am looking forward to the fifth chapter of that soon.

Ciao.

Just so you know, I am the one who put Angelwing on lulu. I am not trying to take credit for your novel. I put it on there because I cant sit and read on a cpu screen. My name was on the cover because lulu puts it on there automaticaly and I was to lazy to change it. I'm sorry for doing it without permission but I hope you understand.

p.s.-May I suggest you put it on lulu for us?

Sorry, John, my last review was supposed to be for the whole story, not just the first chapter...just thought I might as well point that out! Say, when is the sequel to Angelwing being planned for release? I can't wait to read more!

Wow! Great stuff, Mr. Wescott. I'm new to FictionPress, and yours was one of the first stories I came to. Very well done. Great characters, some crazy action and a satisfyingly brutal Western setting. I love it!

Wow. A very nice climax with one of the coolest and craziest fight scenes I've read in a good long while. It really reminded me of the Dan Dority Vs. the Captain fight from season three of Deadwood, with both combatants rolling in the mud and getting terribly messed up. I think an Unforgiven kind of sequel could be very cool. Possibly, one that could involve Clark Reeper. Anyway good job and we can discuss this later.

I've finally finished this story, congratulations on finishing it good job, although I don't know if you should make a sequel to it but still good job.

I'm writing my third installment of my character and I was wondering if you could read one of my stories, mostly 'Trained 2 Kill'

If it's not a hassle
thanks
S J Olusanya

That was an excellent climax. I loved the crazy battle in the carriage, and the way it led to the final battle with Manzo was nicely done as well. This is a very cool Western Story, and I'm looking forward to the conclusion, though I hope there's not any riding off into the sunset just yet. I remember you asking about a cross-over or something a while back, and as always, I'm quite interested.

EVIL! gr i hate cliffhangers.

I do not understand why this story does not have many reviews, i thought it was brilliant. i like the way you focus more on your characters then their surrondings, it makes it more of a character story. :)

Another excellent chapter. I've waited much too long for the conclusion to this awesome tale, and I'm glad it might finally appear. I liked the Good, the Bad and the Ugly reference too, and I'm wondering if there's some other references in the earlier chapters that I missed. Anyway, good job and I can't wait to see more.

Great to see you back in action! The Sepulcher chapter was very well done and the showdown with Jaquin was masterfully done, as well as the search for the True Cross and Durrant's madness. The only problem I could think of is that the fights being one and one seem a little less than the epic Samurai stabfests that I was sort of expecting. I'd kind of like to see Max carve his way through a whole mess of foes, with severed limbs and heads flying everywhere, but maybe that's coming up, and it's probably just a personal preference anyway. I saw your review of Clark Reeper, and it is good to have you back, Mr. Wescott. I can't wait to read more.

That was great fun to read, a real slash 'em up, as I suppose you'd call it. I think the concept is great, a ronin in the old west who rights wrongs and battles his own demons, a Clint Eastwood with a Katana. The whole thing about a ninja being with the bad guys was executed well, but the search for the True Cross seems a little out of place. What's a western tale about Samurais without some Eastern Mysticism. Maybe have Durrant looking for The Lost Cherry Blossom Jewel of Zheng He or something. The villains were delightfully diabolical, though a little bit too predictable in the sex department. This is a Western not a women in prison movie. Speaking of it being a western, a little more western slang would add to atmosphere greatly. Mentiong ferro was a nice touch, but have them talk about President Grant, the Civil War, and say things like 'I reckon' and 'son of a gun' and 'snake in the grass.' Also the Undertaker needs a little more development. He had a pretty creepy description, and I figured him for a necrophiliac or something equally bad, but you never went into much detail about him. Oh, and if you've ever played the video game GUN, the villain, a one-eyed giant of a man looking for a lost treasure, seems to be sort of a copy of Durrant. Maybe that was on purpouse, maybe not. But despite my comments, that was a great bit of hackey-sackey meets the Old West, and I can't wait to see Max give the rest of those varmints their comeuppance.

Cool western fic, it has an ecstatic feel to it!
By the way are you still writing Den of thieves because I'm reading it more than usual,

Excellent story, when are you going to write the conclusion?