We all need a quiet place somewhere to retreat to... even if it is in our heads because we can't escape anywhere else. (This is always my case... I have seven siblings.)
As always, keep it up... :)
~Music

It's a nice poem, and it flowed fairly well. Well done.

it was a good poem in itself. but i didnt get wuite wat it was saying

Hehe, thanks Mary...It made me smile when I read that. I loved the style and I really liked the ending a lot. Oh and by the way, I think I might make an account on here. I'll let you know if/when I do.

i like it but it's not my favourite

been there, done that, doing it still.

the gentle whimsical rhyme is very apt. really nice poem.