Why must people blame themselves for anothers death, though they did not cause it? This was good. I liked it.

I like it, although I haven't played the game to know where you have deviated or stayed true. My only critique is grammatical, which, although not as imoportant, still needs to be considered. I just noticed that you switched verb tenses from past to present at the line "No one was is in the hotel." Other than that, I like it.

The story, although short, has a hugh wieght of meaning and effect to it. Considering that I usually don't search for books like this and happened to find you in criti-sized's reviews, I'm pleased I chose to look at your profile, and I think this has to be one of my first books that I've read where I didn't have to put the D.M.P. on the writer because of oversentimental stories, horrible writing, cliched and repetitional plots, and idiotic characters. So what I'm saying is I honestly like it. Therefore look for my other honest reviews on the rest.