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| laughter at the funeral 2006-07-01 ch 1,  | abusewow, i really like how you used red ink as a very good symbolism...i was just bothered by the word "destinified"...isn't it supposed to be "destined"...the last line is gorgeous... truly yours... |
| Kaye90 2006-06-06 ch 1, | abuseim not sure that i understand it entirely, but i like it nonetheless |
| Zane Richardson Waya Wolf 2006-04-15 ch 1, | abuseExcelent work! I like you style! (Also thank you for your review on Commandos Truth about 9/11 it was touching to know that there are still people out there that don't hate us for being American the world is at ill ease and we're all just trying to get by, everyone of us from every country in the world.) Keep up the great work on your stories, and I'll keep on reviewing ^_^ |
| Sugar-Craze 2006-04-14 ch 1, | abuseVery interesting. Makes you think.. I love the "Hell ain't pretty, Darling".. You're a writer above your years! :) Well, I think so anyway :p Sugarcraze |
| HereForNow 2006-04-09 ch 1, | abusevery nice, i really liked these lines -Hell ain't pretty, darlin But the view sure is- really makes you think good work |
| Bernita Bean 2006-04-03 ch 1, | abuseOh..shivers. I love the whole Red Ink thing. It reminds me of blood. (Isn't that a nice thought?) It reminds me also of something I might sing. Wonderfully done. Much Love,Pumpkin's Vampire |
| Anaare 2006-04-03 ch 1, | abuseWell done, it's a very interesting and enjoyable poem. Good job. |
| forgottenxxfreak 2006-04-03 ch 1, | abusefor some reason this reminded me of The Vampire Lestat...yeah i know it's weird lol i don't know why. It's very nice :D i like it a lot, well done. Bravo! |
| Tanaboo 2006-04-03 ch 1, | abusethis is a lovely piece of writing! well done _Tanaboo x |
| elvenstorm 2006-04-03 ch 1, | abuseSuch interesting imagery that still manages to be mysterious in a way. 'Damn you tripped me'- loved that line, sums up that whole sense of realisation. Great work. |