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Reviews For: In My Mind
EmotionalOutlaw 2006-08-14 . chapter 1
very sweet, but almost a little depressing. i like it a lot
Faithless Juliet 2006-04-03 . chapter 1
This is interesting; it’s astounding how much of ourselves primarily exist in the mind - the parts of ourselves that we know so well yet show no one else. This is very good; your work always shocks me into this mood of “yeah, I get that!” and I never really know what to say because I understand it all. This one is more simplistic then the others that I’ve seen from you but it almost lends to the idea that the complexity is underneath everything, like everything else - you know what I mean?

Much love,Juliet.
Annie Squeedle 2006-04-03 . chapter 1
Oh, so poigniant! I really like this poem, I can really relate to it. The tender images... Very lovely.
Elizabeth Bilberry 2006-04-03 . chapter 1
Just beautiful, a lot does happen in just our mind.

EB
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