wow, tiz one great poem! the repitition of 'please' at the end makes it really powerful because the persona seems really weak, and that's exactly what they don't want to be. Mind-boggling.

This is so great,

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it expresses a fear but also i kind of yearning for that which you fear? that's what i get out of it. it's great.

AH! So angsty, it makes me want to cry and run to someone that needs that caring, that love. Even though they don't want it. Oh, and for the record I must disagree; Love is not a weakness, it's a strength between two souls.