|Reviews for Terrible Feeling|
| Isca 9/20/08 . chapter 1
"Give me back my coldness, my frost." A line riddled with wisdom, pain, philosophy, morality, etc. :)
| Femme de Dieu 4/22/06 . chapter 1
Liked the last line very much. "Give me back my coldness, my frost"
If you feel so inclined go read "Emotions Impaled" on my page. It expresses the same thing you did, but in a comical way.
I do find it ironic that your interests are all very faith-oriented, yet you find it easier to write about sadness. I do relate at times. But I also have a lot of very upbuilding poetry I've written as well. I don't post it usually, though. When I have, no one reviews it. I think most people are turned off by someone who DOES have faith in God as a real tangible person. Seems to be "not cool" or "not enlightened" in their books.
Whatever, it matters not to me, other than I think they are missing out a very meaningful aspect of life.