Wonderful rythm and all-around great poem with a true message.

Oh my, slightly disturbing but well wrote none-the-less. Is this story perhaps forshadowing a sanguine nature and a past life that was lived?

Beautiful. I get shivers.

-Pumpkin's Vampire

great use of rhyming with this theme, a very well constructed poem, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.