I can only use on word to describe the main character and that is dramatic and slightly stalker-ish.

Aww, how cute! This is really pretty. The descriptions of the boy are great, he sounds beautiful. Good job, keep writing!

I love this...it's so cute. I think everyone has felt this way before so it makes it better XD

Love! xoxoxo

hehe...quite an obsession...hehethat boy is so beautiful that he seems almost unreal. mmh I love it so please...keep up the good work!

oh oh lovely first chapter! and I absolutely love your descriptions! that boy seems very mysterious...I'm curious! hehe...

Aw cute. So are you writing more for this? I want to know what happens with them.

Love xoxoxox