 Prophetic Vixen 2006-04-04 . chapter 1An amazing portrayal of a verbal and abusive fight; almost too close to home as far as one person having a solid upper hand that slowly dwindles until the fight is over...I'm not certain about the use of 'epidermis'. Not the most poetic word in the world, but it does fit into context so...::shrug:: just a suggestion. Fantastic work. |