I agree that's pretty deep for a 14 year old. It must be amazing to see what kind of person you are now! I wonder is it anything like this boy in the person in the poem; the layered boy with many questions? Cheers.

Thanks for the review! I like this poem pretty well. I've asked myself those questions before...I'm sure many have. I wish I could've written like this when I was 14! It flows well, even with no rhyme scheme. I like the imagery...Especially "What is my life to the world?/What is it to me?/It’s water changing to blood,/Leaking out through my fingers/onto the cruel uncaring world". Very good!