Beautifully told. I love this; it kind of reminds me of some of Roald Dahl's darker work. Can't explain why..

Very Well Done.

KEEP WRITING!

F.C

I've a new piece up that is dark and sort of a Modern hard hitting Noirish piece. "The Misery of Rain". I'd love to hear your thoughts. See what you think. ^_^

I can't find anything about this poem that I don't like. Very good piece, and haunting after-image. This will stay with me for awhile.

Simply Beautiful!

~XoXo~

Excellent. It has this dark quality, prophetic, I suppose. Very intriguing. I have to say I loved it. It just grabs your attention and demands to be read. The rhyming pattern is wonderful, very good flow. It reads great. The message, dark, but beautifully put across. Makes it all the more truthful. Good job! ^_^-*Save me from the nothing I've become.*--*GiNnY*-

Interesting and well written. I liked reading it. It holds a peculiar underlying darkness. I like the mystery too. Very well done.