Hemorrhaging... forgot that word existed. Great poem here. I like the every other rhyming and the imagery.

This is a beautiful poem, but I gotta tell you... "hemorrhaging" has got to be the UGLIEST word in the english language.

Anyways... great job!

Wow! This is a powerful poem!

All SMILES :)

~XoXo~

Wow. Just wow. Another dark, angsty one. But it is very very good. Excellent job. It worries me though, that your work is all so dark. Do you suffer depression or something? Are you okay? I don't mean to sound rude, simply concerned. If you ever need someone just to listen to you, I'm here. Again, great work though.-*Perhaps it's because I'm the one of us to survive.*--*Ginny*-