This is good; I found the bolding&c. sort of unecessary. Let the words emphasis themselves. Other than that, good stuff.

Hey, I've read worse referances. One of my poems about joint suicide became necrophiliac sex.

And was announced in full shcool assembly

*chuckles*

Anyway, the poem. Like the stresses with italics and bold. Well developed. The imagery is priceless.

heh, you haven't read my stuff yet, besides the silly vampire thing... i'm curious as to your take on anything else i've written...anyway, this was great. excellent words and kind of a loving description of brutality in rape. very good. cheers-rabbit

this has amazing detail. . . wonderful.

Nice formatting. Has some very stark images. Good work. I especially liked the ending.

She savors these harsh comforts,-i dont often see why people would stay with someone who rapes them

gifts

i cannot relate too well here