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| Tiffini 2006-04-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love the emotion Ben...just not what's behind it. |
| StoryChris 2006-04-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseThe image of the soul-death is striking, if a bit stark. I would be interested in a companion piece (if the soul is reborn). The brief, simple language gives it power. Well done. |
| Princess-anna57 2006-04-03 ch 1,  | abuse*applaudes* good job, I like it! Write on! ~Anna~ |