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a lonely september 2006-06-02 . chapter 1
this is a little weird, but interesting, a niceweird, and tells quite a bit about you. a nice read.
kissitgoodbye 2006-04-14 . chapter 1
It's a really good poem,But you seem to have a slight problem with your rhyme in these two lines.(Lord, I know I’m a little morbid.

And I’m satanic lord forbid.)The second rhyme is not the right amount of syllables.Although it looks like it rhymes on paper,It sounds funny when coming off the tongue.
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