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| Lyralis 2006-09-05 ch 1,  | abuseThis is cool too^^ I like the part sbout sin being etched into your soul. |
| Wildrook 2006-04-07 ch 1, | abuseWell I disagree with your boyfriend. lol. I really like this one. I like the part about sin being lines etched in your soul and being made of cracks. Again, I really like the rhythm of this; I like the way you arranged the words. |