aww..bittersweet almost..touches you deep inside..esecially to those who understand these type of feelings..very cool ^_^ -sky

that was a good poem i like poems like that cause there is a lot of felling in them

Ja'Ne'Ja'Sai'Con'Des'Mon'Kes'Coen! That is a nice little sentence in my twisted little language that means One Of One Who Sees The Way I See! Have fun peepsie, and Nice work ^_^

This poem was such a great poem. So much emotion... I feel so sorry for you. Slitting your wrists and all... :S I hope you feel better ASAP.

A very interesting poem and it isn't contradicting at all. More like it shows about the things people secretly harbour and wish. Like for the alternate path their lives could have taken if a certain thing from the list had happened. Very goo. Really meaningful.