 Stephanie Kelly 2006-03-25 . chapter 1Awseomeness, that was a neat little twist at the end, a sort of "I hate you but I love you." |
 meep2creep 2005-07-04 . chapter 1I didn't know this poem was about ME! I feel happy!but it is simi vicious, but still, I think it's fancy.
Happy day,
MEEPLY |
 under estimated artistsoul 2005-02-10 . chapter 1Very different and unquine at the same time. Ok, I know I can't spell well, so sorry :( yeah, you were speaking this in the sense of the daisy like the phrase, "He loves me He loves me not..." Yep, sounds kinda familiar in that sense. Overall, an Ok poem. |
 Sofystikated 2003-01-12 . chapter 1wow. that's really good. cant and DONT change a single word because that's a very classic poem. hmm never felt that way before tho...
-Akochik
ps. keep writing! |
 allie cole 2002-03-10 . chapter 1I love contradictions... I use them in pretty much everything I write. This is good, it really sounds like you're saying these words to the person even though it's merely on my computer screen in the form of pixels... excellent job!
-al |
 exitophelia 2001-03-22 . chapter 1I'm not so good at reviews so i'll just say...I like it! :) |
 Archaic Tears 2001-03-10 . chapter 1^_-..I like..and your poetry does not suck..I would have said so if THAT were true..I like your work..you have talent..you are able to take what you feel inside and put it into words..how many people do you know (aside from FF.net ^_^)know how to do that and get reviews or recognition..hmm...so there ^_^ -sky |
 The Confuser 2001-02-23 . chapter 1Hais'Ne'Twen! Hate of Love! Well, I'd say that's another well-done work o art ya got there. Reis'Dem'Naca! |
 42003 2001-02-23 . chapter 1OMG that just interpreted some confused feelings. Well written! |
 the Cheshire Cat 2001-02-23 . chapter 1Another meaningful poem. Perhaps next time you could try a little bit more elaboration, that's just a suggestion. Really sweet. |